Why you mentioned higher minimum wages. How does that relate to the topic? I felt that you introduced it suddenly from nowhere and it was not relevant. I felt it went off topic. Now as I am in London I can understand you better and why you thought of that as the minimum wages have increased recently but I think it is not relevant. What do you think? And how does that reduce crime and poverty? What is the relation? Do you mean instead of giving high salaried government should let companies pay their employees higher salaries? I feel there us something missing
I feel that the third paragraph needs a second thought or I misunderstood it.
Could you clarify my doubts please.
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